We need to talk this through - it does not tell a clear story - it would confuse a viewer - I need to know why the thugs are after the victim and which of these are flashbacks and which are not. It may be worth add ing a comment at the top that you read this storyboard from the bottom sheet up!(Mrs D)
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We need to talk this through - it does not tell a clear story - it would confuse a viewer - I need to know why the thugs are after the victim and which of these are flashbacks and which are not. It may be worth add ing a comment at the top that you read this storyboard from the bottom sheet up!(Mrs D)
Well, we went off your story board so if you dont understand it, thats not our fault (Liam)
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